THI´S MARCIA. SHE'S ABOUT THIRT-SIX,SHE SHORT AND FHIN. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WEARING A WHITE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR OF SANDALS.YOUR PERSONALITY IS FUNNY,HARD-WORKING,DEDICATED.
THI'S KAMILA IS IN HER TEENS. SHE'S AVERAGE HEIGHT AND SLIM. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WERING A BLUE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR SANDALS. YOUR PERSOLITY'S ORGANIDED,JEALOUS AN FUNNY.
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THI´S MARCIA. SHE'S ABOUT THIRT-SIX,SHE SHORT AND FHIN. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WEARING A WHITE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR OF SANDALS.YOUR PERSONALITY IS FUNNY,HARD-WORKING,DEDICATED.
THI'S KAMILA IS IN HER TEENS. SHE'S AVERAGE HEIGHT AND SLIM. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WERING A BLUE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR SANDALS. YOUR PERSOLITY'S ORGANIDED,JEALOUS AN FUNNY.
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Hello Fran,
Nice job! :) Let's correct now!
1. THI´S MARCIA. SHE'S ABOUT THIRT-SIX,SHE SHORT AND FHIN. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WEARING A WHITE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR OF SANDALS.YOUR PERSONALITY IS FUNNY,HARD-WORKING,DEDICATED.
(THIs is MARCIA. SHE'S ABOUT THIRTy-SIX and SHE is SHORT AND tHIN. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WEARING A WHITE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR OF SANDALS. her PERSONALITY IS FUNNY, HARD-WORKING and DEDICATED.)
2. THI'S KAMILA IS IN HER TEENS. SHE'S AVERAGE HEIGHT AND SLIM. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WERING A BLUE BLOUSE,JEANS AND A PAIR SANDALS. YOUR PERSOLITY'S ORGANIDED,JEALOUS AN FUNNY.
(THIs is KAMILA. she IS IN HER TEENS. SHE'S AVERAGE HEIGHT AND SLIM. SHE HAS LONG STRAIGHT BLACK HAIR AND BROWN EYES. SHE'S WEaRING A BLUE BLOUSE, JEANS AND A PAIR of SANDALS. her PERSOLITY' iS ORGANIDED,JEALOUS AN FUNNY.)
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Well done, but you shouldn't use uppercase letter!!
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