Clothes I wear
I adore wearing clothes basic and sportive
The colors what more healthy taste: red and blue. I like of jeans and tennis.
I like organizing the pieces for style and colors to make easy the choice of colors and combinations of styles.
I claim that you always wear clothes basics so they leave me more the will and looted.
Fran Santos
domingo, 22 de março de 2009
Clothes I wear
Clothes I wear
I adore wearing clothes basic and sportive
The colors what more healthy taste: red and blue. I like of jeans and tennis.
I like organizing the pieces for style and colors to make easy the choice of colors and combinations of styles.
I claim that you always wear clothes basics so they leave me more the will and looted.
Fran Santos
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Hey Fran,
Really nice job! :) Let's correct it?
1. clothes basic and sportive ( basic and sportY clothes )
2. The colors what more healthy taste: red and blue. ( THE CLOTHES I MOST LIKE ARE: RED AND BLUE)
3. I like of jeans and tennis. (I like jeans and tennis.)
4. for style and colors (...BY style and colors.)
5. to make easy the choice of colors... (IT GETS easy TO MAKE the choiceS of colors...)
6. (I claim that you always wear clothes basics so they leave me more the will and looted.) I DIDN'T GET WANT MEAN FRAN!!! AND IT SEEMS YOU'VE BEEN USING GOOGLE TRANSLATOR. YOU DON'T NEED THIS! :( PLEASE, DO IT BY YOURSELF!
Teacher
Hi,
Well done!
let' check,
1. I adore wearing clothes basic and sportive (I adore wearing basic and sportive clothes.)
2.The colors what more healthy taste: red and blue. I like of jeans and tennis.
(My favorite colors are red and blue and I like jeans and tennis.)
3. ...to make easy the choice of colors and combinations of styles. (...to be easy to choose the colors and the combinations of styles.)
4. I claim that you always wear clothes basics so they leave me more the will and looted.
(I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND THIS) rewrite it please!
My congrats,
Teacher
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